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Filrena
Posts: 234 Points: 1034 Join date: 2009-04-01
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Thu Sep 24, 2009 2:49 pm | |
| ...You should know better everything I do is halfway thought through =P Besides, it apparently worked out anyway XD |
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Filrena
Posts: 234 Points: 1034 Join date: 2009-04-01
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:18 pm | |
| With the post length, I imagine you can understand when I say I was pretty pissed off to lose it. @.@; The first time I tried to make my post, someone wanted to plug in their flash drive to play music. I was totally fine---plugging it in accidently knocked out my laptop's power cord. ...My post was almost finished. ;.; Yeeahhh...that's why it's roughly 4 and a half hours before you get your post >.>; |
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silinrul darastrix7 Moderator


Posts: 291 Points: 591 Join date: 2009-03-29 Location: Bacon
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Thu Sep 24, 2009 8:11 pm | |
| >_> I blame Nox Edit: ^^; you know fil, I think it's nearly impossible fer people to understand when you try to explain stuff. ._. |
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Filrena
Posts: 234 Points: 1034 Join date: 2009-04-01
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:37 pm | |
| What makes this awkward is that successfully reaching this point then failing to achieve the desired effect, and in so realizing that the 'achievement' was an ineffective goal. >.<; Sooo I'm hoping what my next post does works out for everyone. ^^; |
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BreakNova
Posts: 37 Points: 263 Join date: 2009-09-09
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Sun Sep 27, 2009 4:54 am | |
| Yeah, I have to agree with Seikh. You need to simplify your descriptions to allow other readers to comprehend them easier. It may not seem hard for you when you read them, but that is because you already know exactly what everything looks like. Keep in mind that when you are writing a description, you want to give the reader a good, general idea what it looks like BUT also allow them room for their own imagination to fill in the gaps. A lot of people say that some authors don't describe enough, but that's only when you forget to describe things, rather than not describing that particular subject enough. Next time, when you write a description about something, reread it at a reader's perspective. |
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silinrul darastrix7 Moderator


Posts: 291 Points: 591 Join date: 2009-03-29 Location: Bacon
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Sun Sep 27, 2009 9:22 am | |
| I'd listen to this kid Filmato Juice. He has a book out.  Advertise it nao nova! Do eet! Do eet nao! |
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Filrena
Posts: 234 Points: 1034 Join date: 2009-04-01
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Mon Sep 28, 2009 11:37 am | |
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silinrul darastrix7 Moderator


Posts: 291 Points: 591 Join date: 2009-03-29 Location: Bacon
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Wed Sep 30, 2009 11:05 pm | |
| Yep. ^^; just isolated Aji. He's gonna stand there and watch now... |
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Filrena
Posts: 234 Points: 1034 Join date: 2009-04-01
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Thu Oct 01, 2009 8:13 pm | |
| *stares* ...That's a lot of turns I skipped o_o; |
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silinrul darastrix7 Moderator


Posts: 291 Points: 591 Join date: 2009-03-29 Location: Bacon
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Sun Oct 04, 2009 8:47 am | |
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Filrena
Posts: 234 Points: 1034 Join date: 2009-04-01
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Sun Oct 04, 2009 11:33 am | |
| I blame myself because my super-ultra-grand-dependable reintro...! was into a kitchen >.<; |
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silinrul darastrix7 Moderator


Posts: 291 Points: 591 Join date: 2009-03-29 Location: Bacon
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Sun Oct 04, 2009 2:41 pm | |
| Yeah, I blame you too. I was just trying to be nice.  Everything is your fault though, remember? |
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Filrena
Posts: 234 Points: 1034 Join date: 2009-04-01
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Wed Oct 07, 2009 5:01 pm | |
| Well, carnivorous and raw...I have to ask myself...how'd she become a good cook again? Oo; |
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silinrul darastrix7 Moderator


Posts: 291 Points: 591 Join date: 2009-03-29 Location: Bacon
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Wed Oct 07, 2009 9:53 pm | |
| ^^; My sentiments exactly...  Boy she can just do everything huh? Yay! Super mom! *Sarcasm* Sad day when a kid cooks better than the mom? Lul |
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Filrena
Posts: 234 Points: 1034 Join date: 2009-04-01
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Fri Oct 09, 2009 11:48 pm | |
| I think Aji just has poor luck... ;.; |
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silinrul darastrix7 Moderator


Posts: 291 Points: 591 Join date: 2009-03-29 Location: Bacon
 | Subject: Re: (OOC) Tower of Sin Sat Oct 10, 2009 12:12 am | |
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